describe a little more thoroughly in places, e.g. slide 11 - 'these 3 characters match the genre well' - why?! because they're stereotypical young female victims? or... 'slow motion to emphasise a scene' - be more specific: when did you use slow mo and for what effect?
obviously these all need images too - videos are now online so get lots and compare with real Suspense films - IMPORTANT!
make sure you're answering the question too, in every slide - so slide 13 - lots of emphasis on the main female character - get an image from your film but also Scream, Psycho, etc. where it's the same, to prove you're meeting a convention of the suspense genre
finish with a conclusion saying you used, developed and challenged certain film opening & Suspense conventions, with a quick e.g. of each
describe a little more thoroughly in places, e.g. slide 11 - 'these 3 characters match the genre well' - why?! because they're stereotypical young female victims? or... 'slow motion to emphasise a scene' - be more specific: when did you use slow mo and for what effect?
ReplyDeleteobviously these all need images too - videos are now online so get lots and compare with real Suspense films - IMPORTANT!
make sure you're answering the question too, in every slide - so slide 13 - lots of emphasis on the main female character - get an image from your film but also Scream, Psycho, etc. where it's the same, to prove you're meeting a convention of the suspense genre
finish with a conclusion saying you used, developed and challenged certain film opening & Suspense conventions, with a quick e.g. of each
B-
Good - most changes made - to decent standard. Just creeps into A territory - lots of good thinking and examples used. Well done.
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