A few minor grammatical errors and one or two areas could be expanded on (settings - what are the implications or connotations of being stranded on a beach? does it add enigma, etc.) but overall very good.I'll give you an A- for this, well done
A few minor grammatical errors and one or two areas could be expanded on (settings - what are the implications or connotations of being stranded on a beach? does it add enigma, etc.) but overall very good.
ReplyDeleteI'll give you an A- for this, well done