Get the m-e-s stuff up, i'll be generous this time and give you the feedback but on another day it could ruin your time management mark...
you might want to talk more about the connotations of certain things, certainly low key lighting which we associate with uncertainty, fear, etc. For actors, you need to consider how they will act – body language, facial expressions etc, as well as their physical attributes (which you do mention, albeit quite briefly). Finally you might wish to talk about ‘referential’ aspects of certain props/settings. i.e. where have you seen these things before and what do you associate them with (e.g. I’ve seen a cellar in Pyscho and this can therefore be used as a reference to murder/death/horror, etc. B
Storyboards: Excellent detail and well described, although a slight lack of emphasis on editing. Also one or two shot descriptions I’m not 100% on (i.e. extreme long shot in cellar?). A-
Get the m-e-s stuff up, i'll be generous this time and give you the feedback but on another day it could ruin your time management mark...
ReplyDeleteyou might want to talk more about the connotations of certain things, certainly low key lighting which we associate with uncertainty, fear, etc. For actors, you need to consider how they will act – body language, facial expressions etc, as well as their physical attributes (which you do mention, albeit quite briefly). Finally you might wish to talk about ‘referential’ aspects of certain props/settings. i.e. where have you seen these things before and what do you associate them with (e.g. I’ve seen a cellar in Pyscho and this can therefore be used as a reference to murder/death/horror, etc. B
Storyboards: Excellent detail and well described, although a slight lack of emphasis on editing. Also one or two shot descriptions I’m not 100% on (i.e. extreme long shot in cellar?). A-