Opening Intro – re-word it (read it back!) Check spelling! Whilst talking about how Dumb and Dumber spell words wrong you spell ‘spell’ as ‘slept’… Film names – Capital Letters Very nice otherwise – but definitely needs a re-read Also, finish with a summary listing all film opening conventions
Opening Intro – re-word it (read it back!)
ReplyDeleteCheck spelling! Whilst talking about how Dumb and Dumber spell words wrong you spell ‘spell’ as ‘slept’…
Film names – Capital Letters
Very nice otherwise – but definitely needs a re-read
Also, finish with a summary listing all film opening conventions
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Thank you sir, I have now updated it
ReplyDeleteThat's my boy - an A grade piece of work. Well done.
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